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(Woman to Horse Mini TF)

Jinny entered the cave with fear, she was worried this wouldn't work. There have been legends of a wizard who lived in this cave, they said he had the ability to change how people look and think. Jinny was going to see if these legends were true. She kept walking, observing moss and rocks scattered throughout the cave. Jinny took out a flashlight as she mumbled "There's no way there's anything in this cave, I knew those stories were stupid." As she walked, she looked for anything out of the ordinary, anything that may be where a wizard lives. There was nothing, just rocks and occasionally moss. The only sound was the echo from her own footsteps, deepening the deeper she went into the cave. "This is useless, I'm wasting my time." She mumbled. Just when she's about to give up and turn around, she sees a light farther into the cave. The light seemed to stick out more than anything else. So she kept going, towards the light in the cave. As she walked, she yelled towards the light "Anyone there? Um, I need help!" Over the echo of her own voice she faintly heard the sound of metal clanging. She started running towards the light, rather than walking like she was. 

She was almost there when she heard a man's voice say "A person? I thought they forgot about me."

Jinny didn't respond and just kept running. As she approached where the light was coming from, she saw that the light was a fire. In the light of the fire there was a bookshelf, a table, and a door. She wondered where the door went. She soon saw a man was standing by the fire, wearing red robes. She finally reached the light as she said "Hello?" 

"I never thought I'd see another face again." Said the man. He turned around and faced Jinny. "I'm assuming you came because of the legends?"

Jenny nodded and said "Yes sir, are they true?"

"They are very true, but it seems you've already heard enough about me; Why are you here?"

Jinny caught her breath and said "I'm a chemist, but not a very good one. I can't get anywhere, I'm just not smart enough. I've heard legends of what you have done and I wondering if you were able to make me a little... well a little smarter."

"You want your mind altered? That's a new one, usually when people come here they ask for some transformation into a stupid animal or anything, which they always regret by the way."

Jinny looked at him confused and said "Nothing fancy, I just need to be smart enough to make a living for myself."

"Well that'll be easy for me. I can do that. I can alter your mind so that you can excel and chemistry and way beyond."

"Please do." Jinny said, without hesitation.

The wizard closed his eyes and started mumbling something and Jinny couldn't recognize. She started to feel funny all over her body. She closed her eyes, not out of choice, she just did it. She felt something shock her body all over, and then she opened her eyes again. The first thing she was herself standing in front of her. Not her, a clone. It looked exactly like her. She looked at her own body just to make sure she was still her, and the clone hadn't stolen her body or something. She was still her, they both were the same person. 

She turns around to the wizard and says "What is this?"

"You said you wanted to have a mind that was smarter, so I made a copy of your body, except this one has a smarter mind."

Jinny looked at him and said "That's not what I meant! I wanted you to improve my mind, not clone me with a better mind! Undo it!"

The wizard stared back at her and said "I can't undo it. I'm very sorry, you should've asked for more details, or at least not ask for help from a stranger you meet in a cave."

"What are you going to do? What's going to happen to me, like the real me?"

"You're new and improved self will take over your old life, and the old one be put into a brand new body."

Jinny panicked, she looked frantically for something to do. The only way she thought she could escape was running. So she started running towards the entrance of the cave. She made it about halfway when she started to feel different. She started to feel numb in her hands. She stopped running and looked at her hands. They both were starting to clench into a fist, she couldn't move her fingers anymore. She kept watching to see her fingers start to fuse together into hooves. She felt fur starting to grow on her arms. She didn't know what to do, everything was changing. She felt sharp pain on her head as her ears starting moving to the top of her head, and then start to change shape to form a horse's ears. Her feet started to feel numb the same way her hands did. She was horrified of everything that was happening, she wanted to cry. She felt her nose start to grow bigger, slowly. Her eyes started spreading away from each other, her entire vision was stretched out from what it used to be. Her sight on each eye didn't connect to the other eye anymore as her nose kept growing. She looked down to see the fur now completely covered her arms and was starting to spread up her torso. She started to feel unbalanced, she looked down to see her feet were now hooves as well. Her nose was now about twice the length of her face when she was human and she started to feel dizzy because of it. She fell over and caught herself with her front hooves that used to be her hands. She started to feel her spine growing. She felt the fur now covering about half of her her torso, and completely covering her back hooves. She gave in and yelled "Please help me! I don't want to be a horse!" The noise echoed even more because of her newly changed ears. Her nose finally stopped growing. Her eyes started moving closer together again and she could see clearly again. Her muzzle that used to be her face now blocked half of her vision. She could do nothing but stare at the monstrosity that was now her. Her tailbone started to grow, and she soon felt a tail behind her. She felt the fur covering almost her entire body now, except her head, but it was still spreading. She felt her arms and legs start getting longer and straighter. She couldn't bend them anymore. Her torso started to change shape and soon resembled a horse's torso. Her clothes started to rip and fall off. When they did, she finally got to see what had happened to her body. It looked exactly like a horse's body, there was no way to tell she was once a human. The fur finally reached all the way up her head and the transformation was complete. 

She was terrified. She thought to herself "What am I supposed to do now?" She tried speaking but it only came out as a "Neigh." She had her perfectly intact human mind, it hadn't adjusted to become a horse's mind, which means she had no idea how to do anything. She started walking on her four legs towards the exit of the cave, stumbling because she wasn't used to walking like this. 

She kept stumbling hopelessly towards the exit when she heard behind her "What's a horse doing here?"

Jinny turned her head to see it was her clone, standing behind her, in her body. Her clone walked over to her and said "Maybe it wasn't that I was too dumb for my job, maybe that job just wasn't for me. Maybe I should start something else, like a horse stable."
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